Teh Wozzinator

hey jab!! It's about TIME you posted this! lol... It is long, but I don't think it's too long to read, even though it's too long for a good review ...

You're really not going to get feedback on this I'm afraid. Before anyone is going to really seriously review this, you need to reformat and proofread this. You need spaces ...

Um, I'm not even going to edit this right now, because it was way too hard to read.... Your grammar is terrible. You need quotation marks, something to set off ...

Hey, thanks for continuing my story! (unless you're just hopping on from right here, in which case I suggest you go and find "The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 1) A ...

This was a bit confusing because... it doesn't really make sense. The lines don't fit together very well. I like your flow and your rhyming, and I liked the story ...

I've read part three, and honestly... I liked it. I don't have time for a good edit now, but there is one thing I wanted to say: "It was thin, ...

Wow!! I really liked this. You sound like a good journalist! Haha, this was my favorite chapter, because I finally figured out what the Mutts were!! (Although I had a ...

I like these stories, but this seemed kind of confusing to me--more than the others. No time for a "proper" review right now, but I'd just like to say that ...

I thought that this was quite good. I liked your imagery and I love the idea! But to me it doesn't seem all that much of a poem.... It seems ...

Well, this is really too short to give a good review on, but I will comment. I liked it, it has a good feel and descriptions. One thing that you ...

Whoa! Dude! That last part was amazing! I loved it! There was only one sentence that made no sense to me: All his strength let him do was object with ...

Well, I'm planning on this story being it's own book, but if it is too short, I can turn it into a novella and add some short stories on as ...

wow, people really are liking this chapter.... actually, this is one of my favorite so far...probably my favorite of the ones that I've posted on YWS. (I liked writing "The ...

Hey Valor, me again. Lol! Thanks for PMing me.... Anyways, I really don't have time for a part two edit right now, but I might later today. I just wanted ...

my edits in bold Chapter Two Part III Aedomir looked round and caught a glimpse of the passage they had come from. A major Major sounds interesting here...I don't know ...